Dart Weapons

Logline Notes 2/11/19

Michelle:

• "Swashbuckling" adventure
• D'art as a destitute inventor
• More irony/contrasting language
  

Brielan:

• Streamlining ideas
• Play up Dart's youth against mature Mechateers
• Find contrast and play up elements of elite Mech fighters and young mechanic

Paige:

• Why is he dreaming of becoming mechanic for royal family? 
• Gameplay logline= a little bit ambiguous
• Relate game to another popular title
• Establish relationship between what you are doing and what's been done, and emphasize the differences in your idea
  

Karly: 

• "Disgraced" Father should become significant to story
• Make every single line mean something
• Think about economy of language
• Logline goal: Hold people's attention throughout the duration of your logline

Jack: 

• Be specific in gameplay loglines to test ideas
  

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