Michelle:
- "Swashbuckling" adventure
- D'art as a destitute inventor
- More irony/contrasting language
Brielan:
- Streamlining ideas
- Play up Dart's youth against mature Mechateers
- Find contrast and play up elements of elite Mech fighters and young mechanic
Paige:
- Why is he dreaming of becoming mechanic for royal family?
- Gameplay logline= a little bit ambiguous
- Relate game to another popular title
- Establish relationship between what you are doing and what's been done, and emphasize the differences in your idea
Karly:
- "Disgraced" Father should become significant to story
- Make every single line mean something
- Think about economy of language
- Logline goal: Hold people's attention throughout the duration of your logline
Jack:
- Be specific in gameplay loglines to test ideas
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