- Story Logline: When Dart, a mech-anic in a Baroque future is given the quest to return diamonds to the Queen, he must band with the 3 mechateers in order to return the diamonds--until they find out the true identity of the Queen
- Gameplay Logline: A third person, collaborative game that switches between rolling action while outside of the mech and action strategy inside the mech.
Wednesday, February 6, 2019
Dallin Jones Loglines
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Logline:The brash young D’art heads out on a swashbuckling adventure to fulfill his dream of becoming a Mechateer in the great Mechtropol...
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Logline: When France’s most elite mech fighters discover that the nobility are hoarding magical gems for their own corrupt purposes (to sup...
Can you include some more irony here? Why is it ironic to have Dart and the 3 mechateers return the diamonds, or why is it ironic that the queen has a hidden identity? This is what will sell your idea to people.
ReplyDeleteThe gameplay logline is a bit dry, remember that the purpose of this pitch is to sell the game to people!